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The Great Freeze-Out and the Whispering Highway - Script

by Jamie F. Bell | Script

INT. FORD RANGER - PRE-DAWN

The heater fan WHINES, a sad, asthmatic drone fighting the bitter cold.

LEO (20s, buried in a scarf, shivering despite the layers) stares into a flimsy paper cup.

SAM (20s, calm, wearing a flannel that looks deceptively thin) taps the steering wheel in time to a low, off-key hum.

LEO

You got that song stuck in your head again?

Sam doesn't look over. His eyes scan the dark, icy road.

SAM

It’s a good song. Makes you think about journeys.

Leo takes a sip. Grimaces.

LEO

Makes me think about frostbite. You got extra socks?

SAM

Always prepared. Little Mr. "I forgot my long johns but remembered my beef jerky."

Leo unwraps a stick of jerky. The plastic CRINKLES sharply in the cab.

LEO

Jerky is morale. Long johns are a suggestion.

EXT. HIGHWAY - DAY

The beat-up Ford Ranger cuts through a world of flat grey.

Trees press close to the road, leaning in. Ice crusts the road signs.

INT. FORD RANGER - CONTINUOUS

A deep, throaty RUMBLE vibrates the floorboards beneath Leo's boots.

Leo freezes, jerky halfway to his mouth.

LEO

What was that?

Sam’s grip tightens on the wheel. His knuckles turn white.

SAM

Just the engine settling. She’s an old girl.

LEO

A real ancient fossil. You sure she can make it?

Sam taps the gas pedal. The rumble evens out.

SAM

She’ll make it.

INT. FORD RANGER - LATER

The grey sky has turned a blinding, unforgiving white outside the glass.

A sharp CRACK echoes from the dashboard.

Leo jolts upright.

LEO

Did we hit something?

SAM

Ice. Just ice.

A rhythmic, musical PING starts deep in the engine block.

PING.

Hum.

PING.

Hum.

LEO

That sounds like a haunted car horn. Or a bird trapped under the hood.

Sam glances at the temperature gauge. Then the fuel gauge.

SAM

We’ll keep an ear on it.

The PINGING accelerates.

A high-pitched SQUEAL tears through the cab. Like a rusty hinge screaming.

Sam lifts his foot off the gas.

The heater fan SPUTTERS.

WHEEZES.

Dies.

Silence from the vents.

Instant cold radiates from the glass. Leo’s breath immediately plumes in the air, a white cloud of panic.

LEO

Uh oh.

The truck LURCHES.

The engine COUGHS once.

Everything stops. The silence is deafening.

EXT. HIGHWAY - CONTINUOUS

The Ranger rolls to a silent stop on the shoulder.

The wind HOWLS faintly. Nothing else moves in the endless white corridor of trees.

INT. FORD RANGER - CONTINUOUS

Sam twists the key.

CLICK.

He twists it again.

CLICK.

Leo pulls out his phone. Taps the screen.

Black.

Sam pulls out his phone. He holds the power button.

Black.

LEO

Both of them?

Sam nods. He stares out at the impenetrable tree line.

SAM

We have water. Snacks. Blankets.

Leo watches a spiderweb of frost creep across the inside of the windshield.

LEO

For how long?

Sam turns to Leo. The confidence is gone. Fear cracks his mask.

SAM

Did you hear anything before we stopped? A voice?

Leo stops chewing. He lowers the jerky.

LEO

No. Why?

SAM

Faint. Like a whisper. Right here in the truck.

Sam looks up at the ceiling liner, then back to the forest.

SAM

It felt like words.

A low, drawn-out HUM rises from the forest outside.

Not mechanical.

Not wind.

Leo and Sam stare into the white void as the sound vibrates against the glass.

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