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Melgund Township Winter Story Library

The Unmaking at Sparrow Lake - Script

by Jamie F. Bell | Script

SCENE 1

EXT. ACCESS ROAD - DAY

A sensible, late-model sedan STRUGGLES for traction.

Tires SPIN against unplowed gravel.

ARTHUR HOWELL (45), wearing a thin city coat, grips the steering wheel. His knuckles are white.

The car SHUDDERS.

Arthur exhales. A cloud of breath forms in the frigid air.

EXT. CABIN - DAY

The sedan sits parked where the plow line ends.

Arthur trudges through knee-deep snow. A briefcase BANGS awkwardly against his leg.

The landscape is monochromatic. Grey sky. White snow. Black spruce trees.

Arthur reaches the porch. He fumbles with a brass key.

He inserts it into the lock. He pauses. Hesitates.

He turns it.

The mechanism CLICKS.

INT. CABIN - CONTINUOUS

Darkness.

Arthur pushes the door open.

The smell of cold stone and old woodsmoke rushes out.

He steps inside. He does not turn on the lights.

He sets the briefcase on a long pine table. The LATCHES SNAP open, unnervingly loud in the silence.

Arthur checks his watch. He taps the face.

EXT. CABIN - DAY

A low, GUTTURAL GROWL cuts through the wind.

Headlights sweep across the cabin logs.

A heavy-duty pickup truck backs up to the porch steps with practiced ease.

The engine CUTS.

ELLEN MARCH (43) steps out. She wears a heavy red-and-black checkered jacket and a wool hat.

She grabs two cardboard boxes from the bed of the truck.

INT. CABIN - CONTINUOUS

Arthur watches through the window. He straightens his coat. Buttons it.

The front door GROANS open.

Ellen enters. She kicks snow from her boots on a mat that reads 'GO AWAY'.

She drops the boxes next to his briefcase.

ELLEN

Arthur.

ARTHUR

Ellen. The roads were clear, I trust?

ELLEN

Until the turnoff. You’re lucky you didn’t get the sedan stuck.

She opens a box. Rolls of colored stickers spill out. Red. Blue. Yellow. Green.

ELLEN

Shall we begin in the kitchen? I’d like to be back on the highway before dark.

She pulls on thick work gloves.

ELLEN

The forecast mentioned flurries.

ARTHUR

By all means. Lead the way.

INT. KITCHEN - MOMENTS LATER

A cast iron skillet hangs from a hook.

Arthur points to it.

ARTHUR

The skillet.

ELLEN

Blue.

Arthur peels a blue sticker. He presses it onto the handle.

Ellen picks up a worn wooden salad bowl.

ELLEN

This was my grandmother’s.

She slaps a red sticker on the base.

Arthur touches an espresso machine.

ARTHUR

Mine.

Ellen nods.

She points to a butcher block.

ELLEN

Mine.

Arthur picks up a wine glass from a set.

ARTHUR

Yellow?

ELLEN

Yellow.

Arthur applies the sticker.

Outside, the wind begins to MOAN. A low, keen sound.

Arthur glances at the window. The light is dimming. Greyer.

Tiny snowflakes drift past the glass.

He checks his phone.

The screen reads: NO SERVICE.

INT. GREAT ROOM - LATER

The room is spotted with colored dots.

Blue on the armchair. Red on the standing lamp. Yellow on the antique map.

Ellen stands before a floor-to-ceiling bookshelf.

ELLEN

There are seventy-four titles I would like to retain. You may have the rest.

ARTHUR

A list is... efficient. Thank you.

ELLEN

Efficiency is the goal. This is not a wake, Artie. It is a logistical exercise.

She walks to a large kilim rug. She taps it with her boot.

ELLEN

Yellow. It will fetch a decent price.

WHOOSH.

A violent GUST rattles the windowpanes like shaking bones.

The snow outside is no longer drifting. It is driving horizontally. A white blur.

Ellen freezes. She looks at the window.

ARTHUR

Those are not flurries.

Ellen walks to the door. She cracks it open.

A ROAR of wind and snow surges in.

She slams it shut. Leans against it.

ELLEN

We should have listened to the alerts. This is a whiteout.

ZZZ-POP.

The lights flicker.

They die.

Total darkness.

The HUM of the refrigerator cuts out. The silence inside is absolute.

The ROAR outside is deafening.

ARTHUR

Well.

INT. KITCHEN - CONTINUOUS

Pitch black.

ELLEN

Flashlight. Junk drawer. To the right of the sink.

Arthur shuffles forward.

THUD.

ARTHUR

Ah!

ELLEN

Coffee table.

Arthur reaches the counter. He fumbles with a drawer.

CLATTER.

He finds a heavy metal cylinder. CLICKS it on.

A weak yellow beam cuts the dark.

It finds Ellen by the hearth. She holds a box of matches.

ARTHUR

The generator?

ELLEN

Fuel line froze two winters ago. We never fixed it.

ARTHUR

Right. The fire, then.

ELLEN

Wood is on the porch.

INT. GREAT ROOM - NIGHT

Firelight dances on the log walls.

Arthur and Ellen sit on the floor, wrapped in wool blankets.

They eat chili from a can, passing a single spoon back and forth.

The storm HOWLS outside.

Ellen stares into the flames.

ELLEN

Do you remember the first time we came up here? Before we bought the land?

Arthur stiffens.

ARTHUR

It rained. For three days.

ELLEN

You read Moby Dick. You did all the voices.

ARTHUR

My Captain Ahab was legendary.

ELLEN

He sounded like a pirate with a head cold.

A beat of silence. The fire POPS.

ELLEN

Why did you do it, Artie?

Arthur stops eating. He sets the can down.

ARTHUR

It wasn't working, Ellen. We were orbiting each other. Two planets in a decaying orbit.

ELLEN

I am not asking for a poetic abstraction. I am asking for a reason. You just... stopped. You gave up.

Arthur turns to her. His face is flushed in the firelight.

ARTHUR

Gave up? I drowned. The silence in this house was a weapon. I spent every day trying to find a crack in the wall you built.

Ellen pulls the blanket tighter.

ELLEN

That wall was holding me together. When you lost your job, when your father died... I became the manager. I disappeared into it. And you never noticed.

Arthur looks down at his hands.

ELLEN

And then came the emails.

Arthur flinches.

ARTHUR

Ellen...

ELLEN

Was she easier? Than the hollowed-out woman with the wall?

Arthur stares into the fire.

ARTHUR

It was a colossal failure of character. A pathetic, cowardly act. It had nothing to do with her.

He looks her in the eye.

ARTHUR

And I have never, for one second, forgiven myself for it.

Ellen holds his gaze. The wind RATTLES the glass.

ELLEN

Yes. It is.

She turns her back to him. Lays down. Pulls the blanket over her head.

INT. GREAT ROOM - DAWN

Silence.

Pale, clean grey light filters through the windows.

Arthur stands at the glass. He scrapes away a patch of frost.

Outside, the world is buried in pristine white drifts. The storm is gone.

Ellen sits up on the rug. She looks tired.

ARTHUR

It’s over.

ELLEN

Yes.

Arthur moves to the propane stove. He lights a burner. BLUE FLAME.

He heats water. Pours it into two mismatched mugs.

He hands one to Ellen. Their fingers brush.

She accepts it.

They stand by the window, sipping tea.

ARTHUR

What do we do with all this?

Ellen looks around the room. At the stickers. The books. The life.

ELLEN

We can’t keep it. Neither of us. It would be a haunting.

ARTHUR

A haunting. Yes.

ELLEN

We sell it. As is. The furniture, the books, the salad bowl. We sell the whole memory and walk away clean.

Arthur nods. He exhales, a long, deep breath.

ARTHUR

Okay. We sell it.

In the distance, a sound.

CLANK. SCRAPE.

A mechanical RUMBLE grows closer.

Ellen turns from the window. Her eyes are clear.

ELLEN

Right then, Arthur. Let’s figure out how we begin.

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