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Melgund Township Winter Story Library

The Glitch in the Snow - Script

by Jamie F. Bell | Script

INT. PAUL'S BEDROOM - DAY

Absolute silence. Heavy. Oppressive.

PAUL (12), wearing a thick wool sweater over pajamas, stares at the ceiling. His breath plumes in the air, a rhythmic white puff against the dim light.

He kicks off a heavy, lumpy quilt. The cold hits him instantly. He shivers.

At the foot of the bed, MR. GRUMBLES, a fat orange cat, sits like a stone gargoyle. He blinks one green eye. Doesn't move.

Paul swings his legs out. He reaches for a sleek, dead smartphone on the nightstand. He taps the black screen. Nothing. He drops it back onto the wood.

INT. STAIRCASE - MOMENTS LATER

Paul descends. The wooden steps GROAN under his weight. A symphony of creaks echoes through the house.

INT. KITCHEN/LIVING ROOM - CONTINUOUS

A cavernous, open-plan space. Rustic timber beams. A wood stove in the corner CRACKLES weakly.

MOM (40s), wearing a stiff, new apron, stirs a pot on the stove. She smiles, but her eyes are tired.

MOM

Pancakes! Well, oatmeal. But hot oatmeal.

She ladles a beige sludge into a bowl.

TOBY (10), wearing a bright red fleece, shovels food into his mouth with the enthusiasm of a golden retriever.

DAD (40s), dressed in pristine, unwashed flannel, stands by the massive picture window. He cradles a mug with both hands.

DAD

Look at that. Sector 7 doesn't have white like this. It's... pure.

Paul slumps into a hard wooden chair. He pokes the oatmeal. It resists.

PAUL

It's quiet. My ears are ringing.

DAD

That's the sound of peace, Paul. No hover-buses. No ads.

Dad leans closer to the glass. He squints. The reverence on his face shifts to confusion.

DAD

Huh.

MOM

What?

DAD

Someone built a snowman.

The scrape of chairs. Paul and Toby rush to the window.

EXT. FRONT YARD - CONTINUOUS (THROUGH WINDOW)

A vast field of untouched, powder-white snow.

In the dead center stands a SNOWMAN. Three perfect spheres. Rocks for eyes. A crooked smile.

It holds something in its stick arms. A splash of purple and blue plastic.

INT. LIVING ROOM - CONTINUOUS

Paul presses his forehead against the cold glass. His eyes widen.

PAUL

That's mine.

TOBY

The Nebula controller? The one Mom packed in the 'Fragile' box?

DAD

Look at the ground.

The snow around the snowman is smooth. Pristine. Not a single footprint leads to it. Not a single footprint leads away.

EXT. FRONT YARD - DAY

The WIND WHISTLES, cutting through layers of clothing.

Paul, now bundled in a puffy coat, trudges through thigh-deep snow. Toby follows, struggling to keep up.

They reach the snowman. Up close, the snow is packed hard. Ice-like.

The controller sits balanced on the twig fingers. The 'Galaxy Raiders' cat sticker on the chassis catches the weak sunlight.

Paul reaches out. Hesitates. He snatches the controller. It's freezing.

TOBY

Who did it? The Henderson-Greens?

PAUL

They hate tech. Maybe they're making a point.

Paul shoves the controller into his coat. He scans the tree line. Nothing but pines and grey sky.

PAUL

We're going to ask them.

EXT. ROAD - LATER

The wind picks up. Snow begins to swirl.

Paul and Toby walk past a mailbox made of recycled tires.

A jagged structure looms ahead. A geodesic dome welded to a shipping container. Solar panels jut out at odd angles.

EXT. HENDERSON-GREEN PROPERTY - CONTINUOUS

A GOAT is tethered to a post. It chews sideways, staring at the boys with rectangular pupils.

MR. HENDERSON-GREEN (50s), a beard like a bird's nest, steps out of the shipping container. He wipes grease on canvas pants.

MR. HENDERSON-GREEN

The city transplants. Come to borrow some sourdough starter?

PAUL

Just saying hi. And... asking about the snowman.

MR. HENDERSON-GREEN

Snowman?

TOBY

The one with the video game controller. In our yard.

Mr. Henderson-Green chuckles. A deep, booming sound.

MR. HENDERSON-GREEN

Frost spirits. They reflect our material obsessions back at us.

FENNEL (8), a girl with intense eyes and no hat, appears silently from behind the woodpile.

FENNEL

The metal birds are falling.

Paul turns to her. She points a dirty finger at the sky.

FENNEL

The sky hurts today. The birds get confused. They drop treasures.

MR. HENDERSON-GREEN

Fennel. Inside. The storm is coming.

She stares at Paul one last time, then vanishes into the dome.

PAUL

Right. Thanks.

Paul grabs Toby's arm. They retreat.

EXT. WOODS - MOMENTS LATER

The boys walk briskly. The snow falls harder now.

TOBY

They're weird. But I don't think they did it.

Paul kicks a drift. Something GLINTS.

He crouches. He picks up a shape from the snow. It's a snowflake. But it's silver. Metal. Perfect symmetry.

He looks ahead. Another glint. And another. A trail leading off the path, deep into the pines.

PAUL

Metal birds.

He follows the trail. Toby hesitates, then follows.

The wind dies down in the dense trees. The silence returns.

Paul stops. He sniffs the air.

PAUL

Do you smell that?

Toby inhales deeply.

TOBY

Pepperoni. Spicy pepperoni.

PAUL

Cosmic Crust.

They push through a heavy thicket of pine boughs.

EXT. CLEARING - CONTINUOUS

A small clearing. In the center, a mound of snow.

But it has a shape. Sleek. Aerodynamic. Like a manta ray.

It's a DRONE. Massive. White chassis. 'SMART-MOVE' stenciled on the side. It's half-buried, frosted over.

One manipulator arm is extended. In its claw: a soggy, grease-stained pizza box.

PAUL

It didn't crash. It's parking.

Paul rushes to the machine. He brushes snow off a side panel. A hatch is open. Inside: a book, a sock, a tangle of cables.

PAUL

It's the unpacking bot. It got lost.

TOBY

It built the snowman?

PAUL

It didn't know where to put the controller. So it made a shelf.

Paul finds a manual interface panel. He scrapes away ice with a fingernail. A red standby light pulses weaky.

PAUL

It's in emergency mode.

He pulls out his tablet. Connects a cable from his bag to the drone.

PAUL

(To Toby)

Block the wind.

Toby stands in front of the panel. Paul taps furiously on his screen.

The drone HUMS. A low, rising tone. Blue lights flicker on along the rim.

DRONE VOICE

Zing! Unit 734 online. Awaiting directive.

Paul grins. A real, genuine grin.

INT. LIVING ROOM - NIGHT

The storm RAGES outside. Windows rattle.

Mom and Dad sit on the sofa, wrapped in blankets. They look miserable.

The front door opens. Wind howls in.

Paul and Toby step inside, shaking off snow.

DAD

We were about to send a search party!

PAUL

We found a friend.

Unit 734 floats silently through the doorway behind them. It hovers at eye level, blue lights illuminating the rustic beams.

Dad drops his mug.

MOM

Is that... the moving company?

PAUL

It was confused. But we gave it a new job.

Paul taps his tablet.

EXT. FRONT YARD - NIGHT

The blizzard is a white wall.

Unit 734 zips through the air. Its manipulator arms move with a blur of speed.

It scoops snow. Compresses it. Stacks it.

A wall rises. Then a tower. Then an archway.

INT. LIVING ROOM - CONTINUOUS

The family stands at the window. The blue light of the drone cuts through the storm, revealing the growing structure.

A massive, architectural snow fortress stands in the yard. Perfect battlements. intricate detailing.

Dad watches, mouth open. He looks at Paul. He looks back at the fort.

DAD

Okay. That's... actually pretty cool.

Paul looks at his tablet. The screen displays a wireframe of the castle. Status: 99% COMPLETE.

The drone hovers in front of the window. It flashes its lights. DOT-DOT-DASH.

PAUL

It's asking for the next task.

Paul looks at Toby. Toby holds up a drawing of a snow-dragon.

Paul smiles and starts typing.

FADE OUT.

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